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Hidden Feelings
Contributed by
exiled
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
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(Hidden Feelings)
Suffer...........Suffer.
why do i try to hide
all the ways i bleed inside
walking towards the mirror
trying to be the man
that i know i will never be.
i hide the ways that i feel
trying to help you heal
because you suffer.
evertime i see you cry
a piece of me dies inside
i cannot help but to feel this way
as time goes by each day.
i suffer for hiding my true ways
as i wipe the tears from your face
can't go on living this way.
what can i do to help you?
what can i do just to see you smile?
going on day by day
just to make your pain fade away.
could the way i feel be told to you,
perhaps this is why i feel so blue.
i must tell the truth
as i wipe your tears.
forget about myself,
and all of my fears.
the reason that i feel this way?
i will love you, until my dieing day.
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 05:52:51 PM AEST
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| this is outstanding for a first poem, well done:) |
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by taffimai on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 06:04:01 PM AEST
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| Is this really your first poem? I think it's great - welldone. |
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 02:52:24 AM AEST
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| It is full of tears and love. a very lovly write.. its pretty in its ending.. venkat |
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 11:27:58 AM AEST
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Beautiful! I love the end!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by Vixen99 on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 07:12:13 PM AEST
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| I've read one of your poems already and this is the second I've read and you have great talent. Oh my goodness do you have talent. It's so clear and to the point. Amazing job. Again...this is perfectly done. Keep them coming. |
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Re: Hidden Feelings
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:23:25 AM AEST
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This is great for a frist poem. My frist wasn't this good. But it was writen when I was very young. I was only 7 when i wrote my first poem, and I have been writing ever since.
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