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Cobweb Cradle
Contributed by
Swedish
on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 10:34:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Once upon a man,
whom was gifted a child,
while having very little,
still willingly trialed.
He scrounged a web,
from a monstrous spider,
and wove it with care,
in an intricate spire,
and held it together,
with a golden thread,
giving his blood,
thus staining it red.
He built it with thought,
and fortified defenses,
plotting the structure,
intertwining the laces.
Painting the base,
in broad colors of power,
laying plans down,
in this miniature tower.
The child now lay,
bundled in ropes,
keeping him safe,
from ill-wishing folks,
giving him a future,
and showing him a path,
trusting his descision,
would be the one to last.
Copyright ©
Swedish
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2006-11-01 10:34:48]
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Re: Cobweb Cradle
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by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 11:02:23 AM AEST
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| I really love this! It flows so well and the descriptions are beautiful. wonderful work :) |
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Re: Cobweb Cradle
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 01:14:09 PM AEST
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Everything commented above times two. I couldn't have said it better, but I know I felt it just as they said it.
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Cobweb Cradle
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by suupjordan on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 01:56:11 PM AEST
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amazing poem, truely amazing.
great flow, message,and wording. |
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Re: Cobweb Cradle
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 06:43:08 PM AEST
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A very well ascribed piece of poetry. I love the message within this. The flow and rhyme sensational. A top write penned so well. Well done.
warm hugs,
Sue M |
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