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Forever
Contributed by
maestar
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Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 10:05:03 AM in AEST
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Death lingers in the depths of my broken soul,
Centuries pass but take no toll.
This is my forever.
Joyful memories start to crack,
Tears and laughter stand back to back.
I dread forever.
Black hats begin to fray,
Mortal diaries decay.
I am forever.
Daylight my Achilles heel,
The bars at my window forbid me to feel.
I damn forever.
Forever bleeding I will never die,
Forever pleading asking why.
Forever Never Ends.
Copyright ©
maestar
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2006-11-01 10:05:03]
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Re: Forever
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 01:33:04 PM AEST
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"Forever" & "Never" are pretty hardcore concepts...but I feel them here.Right on...write on...
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Forever
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 02:09:33 PM AEST
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| wow beautiful |
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Re: Forever
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 02:30:49 PM AEST
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Bravo to yet another fellow vampire writter!
I really enjoyed this it set a scene very well, I felt it! More please!
Michelle |
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Re: Forever
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by Manda2 on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 03:47:00 PM AEST
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| Very well written Maestar, this is a masterpiece. To live for eternity, to be so alone and so hopeless - so sad! I love this poem, you're so right - forever never ends. |
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Re: Forever
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by brittaney on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 07:14:07 PM AEST
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this was really good!
brittaney~ |
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Re: Forever
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 08:13:50 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. I really liked how the verses were set up. Great Job |
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Re: Forever
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 08:52:54 AM AEST
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| maestar this is brilliant, I loved it you are a great poet, well done xxxxxx |
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