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Dear God: Im sorry
Contributed by
Love_love_kyo
on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 02:21:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Dear God-
As an artist I have found I am truly closest to you
Creator to creator; visionary of all that could be
In this Ive come to realize how weve destroyed your masterpiece
And as individual masterpieces weve destroyed ourselves
And this blue sky canvas, caving in and suffocating us
This sky you painted was never ment to be
Covered in black clouds pouring from stone pipes
Killing this place, killing us, killing your vision...
For this, you cant know how sorry I am.
Please take us home.
Simple happiness doesnt exist here anymore
We hate this hell weve given ourselves
This hell weve painted over your blue sky
We hate eachother
We are destroying ourselves father, take pity
Take pity and take us home
Soon enough the vast majority of us
Will have taken ourselves home...
I will take myself home soon enough...
I crave that simple happiness
When my own skin has grown to tight
And this sky is suffocating me
And my brothers and sisters cast stones at me
Weak, beaten, broken...
This skin is thin now
Lets repaint this world
Lets repaint ourselves
Give me a hand to cling to
Dont let me fall, okay?
Just take me home...
Copyright ©
Love_love_kyo
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2006-10-31 14:21:33]
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Re: Dear God: Im sorry
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 02:24:26 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem.. well done good read |
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Re: Dear God: Im sorry
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 02:24:27 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem.. well done good read |
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Re: Dear God: Im sorry
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by Sio on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 03:28:59 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem. I am not a religious person, but it still speaks and has powerful words. Well done. |
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