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i tremble
Contributed by
vikingbrokk
on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:53:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i can still feel you
smell you
taste you
i remember a time
when it didn't hurt
what did that feel like?
what is it like for you now?
do you remember those times?
i live
i breathe
i exist
i matter
as difficult as this is
i would rather share these feelings
with the few people online
who might read this
than to grovel before you
you are not that special
you do not deserve me
and yet...
i still tremble
Copyright ©
vikingbrokk
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2006-10-30 17:53:15]
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Re: i tremble
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by brittaney on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:12:02 PM AEST
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| i've felt this so many times.... |
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Re: i tremble
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by LadyReeSee on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:36:19 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem its what Im going through right now |
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Re: i tremble
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by Sio on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 09:09:44 PM AEST
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| I feel the exact same thing. Its like, even when you pretend not to care and can never tell them how you feel, you still feel a jolt when you see them. |
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Re: i tremble
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by saj on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 07:28:37 AM AEST
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| i love it...specialy that i lived the same feelings before... good job:) |
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