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Contributed by
donttrytofixme
on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:48:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A cold Heart a bloody art
The pain you give just never ends.
You told me things i let you in,
You showed me love but
thats all come to an end
The slits get longer
The blood gets brighter.
I climb into my bed and
cry until i feel life is dead
Sleep wont come to me now
all i want to do is let go.
I walk into the place of pain
where i take everything in vain.
I see you with her, and i smile
i could never make you feel that way.
Its done i know its just hard to let
go of something that was so right.
I climb back into bed. And hold
your picture has the world around
me gets darker.
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2006-10-30 17:48:40]
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Re: Art
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by vikingbrokk on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:27:12 PM AEST
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| you are not alone in feeling this way... |
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Re: Art
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by LadyReeSee on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:37:55 PM AEST
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| I like it, it seems like all the poems I read today are saying exactly how Im feeling |
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Re: Art
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by Sio on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 09:11:33 PM AEST
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| I agree with the other two posters. It is how I'm feeling right now, and I really connect with it. |
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Re: Art
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 09:22:42 PM AEST
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You're not alone...trust me. This kind of pain is so great...
Peace be with you
~Ravon~ |
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