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Bleed a Work of Art
Contributed by
xforever_faking_a_smile3x
on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 02:23:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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let me go let me go
let me die in peace
take away my pain
my life has been ceased
let me go let me go
let me be at rest
i have nothing left
..i am nothing but a pest
let me go let me go
i am a burden to you
please dont feel guilty
there was nothing you could do
let me go let me go
its time to say goodbye
you really dont need me
i'm not worth any tear you cry
let me go let me go
today is my last day
you've stolen my heart
but i promise you'll be okay
LET ME GO LET ME GO
LET ME CUT MY WRISTS APART
I CANT DO THIS ANYMORE
LET ME BLEED A WORK OF ART
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xforever_faking_a_smile3x
... [
2006-10-30 14:23:54]
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Re: Bleed a Work of Art
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by Sio on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 03:05:05 PM AEST
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| Your poem is beautiful. And I know everyone feels like that at one point or another. I hope you feel better and you find some strength from somewhere. |
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Re: Bleed a Work of Art
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by donttrytofixme on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 05:55:02 PM AEST
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i know how you feel, i get this way, and there is nothing no one can do i just wish that someone could help. Instead of ppl hurting me more, i want them to notice!
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Re: Bleed a Work of Art
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:06:18 PM AEST
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| Wow, I just wrote a poem about the same emotions, relating to my drug abuse. I think you articulated it much better than I did. Excellent job. |
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Re: Bleed a Work of Art
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by brittaney on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:20:08 PM AEST
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| you have a very colorful choice of words. Nice words. (ANd i think everyone has felt like this at one time or another) Brittaney~ |
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