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You said forever- Now I die
Contributed by
lipsofanangel
on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 01:02:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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When you said that you love me
You apparently lied
When you turned and dumped me
inside I died
You took my innocence
And you threw away my love
Not taking into consideration
The fact that i was a young child
Trapped inside a womans body
You promised me the moon, the sun and the stars
When you said forever
I gave you my heart
Not only did you kill
The string of hope that I had left
You are also the cause
Of my early death
A half girl half child
I guess it was worth your while
Fair warning to you as I say good bye
Next time you go to ruin another life
Think twice
Fare well love
I have to die
Copyright ©
lipsofanangel
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2006-10-30 13:02:26]
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Re: You said forever- Now I die
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 01:12:24 AM AEST
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very depressing and sad
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Re: You said forever- Now I die
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by Pain on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 05:49:05 PM AEST
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you are contridicting yourself in the last poem i read you had lost a boy but in this one you are happily in love unless you are back together or have two personalitys it dosen't make sense please explain
personal message me
Pained to read
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