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deaths wispering a lullaby
Contributed by
Cyd
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Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 08:01:20 PM in AEST
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death wispered me a Lullaby
telling me dont start to cry,
im only about to die,
i say my last goodbye,
in a way this is good,
no more being misunderstood,
i wont have to change what i did,
theres no way that i could,
and no more pain,
no more blood stains,
no more red going down the drain,
no more crying in the rain,
death wispeed me a lullaby,
he told me to say goodbye,
i didnt even start to cry,
cuz i was only about to die,
i knew it was the end,
and i had a forever friend,
my friend death, even if he is pretend,
the one that i can depend,
i thought he would come to call,
right after my first fall,
i hoped that he would when i started to crawl,
i tried to hold strong, even though he could hear me bawl,
death wisperes me a lullaby,
and i start to die,
i dont have enough words to say good bye,
and i dont even cry.
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Re: deaths wispering a lullaby
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by shelby on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 11:35:06 PM AEST
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Reading this leaves me with such sadness.
I hope the song really did inspire this write but it is not how you really feel. Overall I enjoyed the write, nice flow to it though it left me a bit haunted .
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Re: deaths wispering a lullaby
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 01:29:21 AM AEST
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wow very impressive write
I agree with Michelle very sad piece
great job |
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Re: deaths wispering a lullaby
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by lieinruin on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 02:16:46 AM AEST
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| Whats the saddest part is that there are thousands upon thousands of people that live their lives with these same feelings everyday. nice write, simply because this is a touchy subject and most people won't touch it with a 10 ft pole. Its not easy to speak of |
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Re: deaths wispering a lullaby
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 08:17:14 PM AEST
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| i loved this poem. it was fluid and had a really nice rhythm. good job |
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