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goodbye forever
Contributed by
crazy
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Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 03:48:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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my body stuck here
my mind is not
all feelings of fear
disappear in one shot
looking to the night sky
i'm free from my life
my mind goes to you
free from thisplace i can't escape
your eyes are my safe house
your arms hold me high
away from my fear and depression
my heart is here still
take hold and squeze tight
the smile on your face burned to my memory
peace within me rises and falls
i can't hold on much longer
trying to be strong without anyone
falling fast from reality
speaking to no one
just my pen and paper
know my fears
catching all my black tears
my blood runs red with hate
for everyone,but you
through a year of missed chances
I lived , dreaming only of you
no one can match
my love that burns like fire inside me
you are my blue sky, my stary night
your voice whispering in the wind
i feel a shove and here cursing
i realize i was day dreaming
time to go back to reality
goodbye forever
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Re: goodbye forever
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by EddieDean on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 10:08:42 PM AEST
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i can feel your pain and anguish, i have been to that place in life, where you just want to end it all. but, when my backs against the wall, i keep going.
you can too friend.
keep going.
Eddie Dean |
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Re: goodbye forever
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by mali on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 12:34:53 AM AEST
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Hay, this is a really awesome poem.
This is i suppose, how I feel all the time.
GD Job!!! |
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Re: goodbye forever
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 01:31:54 AM AEST
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very sad write
take care |
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Re: goodbye forever
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by romance_pyro on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 07:59:49 PM AEST
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| ......GoodBye.....A Forever Farewell |
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Re: goodbye forever
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by Saloni on
Sunday, 19th November 2006 @ 04:11:27 PM AEST
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very sad indeed..
tc |
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