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Fill the Skies
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
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Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 01:36:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Don’t tell me it’s all too hard
- I’ve been there too
and I’m smiling
- you’re looking up
but the world isn’t keeping you down
- you’ve just grown in that seat
those legs of yours still work
- you don’t like your plot
well, hell, get up you fool
- let’s walk and talk
find those things to make you smile
- I’ll come along for the ride
but don’t rely on me
- for I rely on no-one
and will give you help
- for your sake
because it means little to me
- but that the world owns one less
another free bird on the wing
- no stopping this freedom
just try to share the word
- so make the sky full
and they might smile back
- do you feel awake now?
Well, don’t tell me it’s all too hard
- I’ve been there too
and I’m smiling…
16/10/06
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Re: Fill the Skies
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 02:13:19 PM AEST
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Tim,
I'm smiling too. I quite enjoyed your write. Very nice.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Fill the Skies
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 08:40:27 PM AEST
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this makes me feel happy!!
liek shatever bad thigns come there are always the skies to look to, it all gets better eventually!
yay!
:-D the smiley faces love you b/c you made them happy! :-D
hehe
Tim is an amazing poet!
*ashley* |
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Re: Fill the Skies
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by Alison on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 03:26:28 PM AEST
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| very true and very up-lifting. I really like the flow of this write and how its so real and moving. great job! |
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