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A Curse Upon the Dying Ray
Contributed by
doug
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Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 09:59:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I hold away the love below
a rose beneath a foot of snow
athough the heart forlorn for love
may wish a day to rise above
I hold this heart of long despair
I spend the day alone and stare
upon the wind that wrapped the eve
beneath a cloud of rain to grieve
a dying ray of summer sun
is come to plead before the storm
is come to beg the cause of love
and help the day to rise above
a ray , I say , and but a ray
a hurtful dream of older days
begone , bedamned , and hurt no more
begone , and die inside the storm
Copyright ©
doug
... [
2006-10-28 21:59:15]
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Re: A Curse Upon the Dying Ray
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by one-curly-fry on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 01:44:38 AM AEST
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powerful write... The flow too helps hold the melancholy tone of the piece.
I can relate as well - it was actually your comment that drew me in.
Very well written!
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Re: A Curse Upon the Dying Ray
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by True on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 11:21:07 PM AEST
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I liked it, out of your three new ones this was my favorite
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Re: A Curse Upon the Dying Ray
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by needledancing on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:26:59 PM AEST
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| In this poem I felt the sadness that one can have on any given day .Shared and to be recognized for the frail parts we all carry within. Wonderfully done. |
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