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ConfusionLove
Contributed by
angelinaxofann
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Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 02:15:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Confusion.
Thoughts running through my head, confusion.
all the things he said, confusion
Making me believe all his stupid lies,
crying on my bed, confusion.
Why does he put me through all this *********?
my legs feel like lead, confusion.
So many thoughts,
wishing I was dead, confusion.
-SJT
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Love.
Cupid pierced my heart, love.
never want to part, love.
how can no one see?
I loved you from the start, love.
the circumstances wont let us be together.
no we have to be apart, love.
The hurt and pain shooting through me,
like being stabbed with a dart, love.
But remember,
you will always have my heart, love.
-SJT
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2006-10-28 14:15:29]
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Re: ConfusionLove
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 06:31:50 AM AEST
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I don't profess to be a professional writer, I simply put down my feelings in a rhyme, so reading your English class offerings leaves me a bit confused.
The first poem was spoilt by the missing word, now I may be thick, but I have counted the asteriks and the missing word could be anything, or it could be confusion again.
The second offering was much better, the second part of the same experience I would guess, and expressed a lot better.
Taken together I rather liked what you have written, and I am expecting to read the last piece of this trilogy expressing how you have moved on from this heartbreak. |
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Re: ConfusionLove
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by newtopoetry on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 12:45:16 PM AEST
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| very interesting poems i feel like you took the emotions right out of my own soul |
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