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Kyo: Keep Screaming I love You
Contributed by
Love_love_kyo
on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 10:38:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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There is something wrong with me
Because I want to see your pain
Be my muse and show me the uglies
I want to see your pain
See your humanity
See it shatter into a billion pieces
Wear it on your skin for everyone to see
The scars your life has inflicted
Show me the pain I see in your eyes
Show me the ugly
Show me the raw
And throw it in their hateful faces
Eyes pryed open so there is no where to hide
Humanity shattered like a feeble pane of glass
Flesh left raw by the cascading pieces
Tipped red with innocent blood
Flowing freely from the open wounds theyve left you
As I realize Ive fallen in love with your pain
Transfixed, fascinated,
weeping at my own reflection in your eyes
The muse in my head
Screaming darkness like a demons
Sweet whisper in my ear....
Pain without love
Baptized in blood
We are.
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Love_love_kyo
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2006-10-28 10:38:51]
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Re: Kyo: Keep Screaming I love You
(User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 04:09:48 PM AEST
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Very interesting you strike a chopping blow to the standard idyllic romantic. You acheive this with a nice flow and balanced reinforcement of language with a stark truth which is probably so for many who cannot see it or say it:
"...As I realize Ive fallen in love with your pain
Transfixed, fascinated,
weeping at my own reflection in your eyes..."
I also like your conclusion:
"Pain without love
Baptized in blood
We are."
The Marquis de Sade while rolling would sit up and carve this over his tombstones current inscription, perhaps.
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Re: Kyo: Keep Screaming I love You
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by emochick121 on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 03:40:31 AM AEST
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| This is a very interesting poem, I have to admit. I like it alot and I can feel the depth of the poem when I read It. Keep up the good work |
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Re: Kyo: Keep Screaming I love You
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by Shadow36999 on
Thursday, 27th January 2011 @ 04:54:38 AM AEST
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| sounds dark and evil i like it |
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