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A Monster in Maple Village
Contributed by
doug
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Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 09:45:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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candidly talking , frantically walking
suddenly points to a cause
where has he been what has he seen
could it be nothing at all
could it be nothing at all
could it somthing quite tall
where has he been , what has he seen
will it devour us all
people are gawking , something is stalking
something thats horrid and tall
people amiss , though I insist
I have seen nothing at all
I have seen nothing at all
nor is there puzzle to solve
stuffing his corpse in under my porch
I have seen nothing at all
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I am working on stressed and unstressed syllables
and also alternating rhyming schemes to add variety but I
don't know if I'm doing it ( syllables ) right. Truly , Doug
Copyright ©
doug
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2006-10-28 09:45:42]
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Re: A Monster in Maple Village
(User Rating: 1 )
by True on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 11:09:56 PM AEST
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| I wasn't sure I liked it at first but the last stanza was pretty funny |
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Re: A Monster in Maple Village
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 04:21:35 PM AEST
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I don't know if you did it,"right" as I am untrained myself, but, I do know what I like & this is it! Good job!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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