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An Angel
Contributed by
Froggy
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Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 12:17:24 AM in AEST
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The rain will fall,
The wind will blow,
The time is now,
Just let it show
Our hearts still beat,
Our Lungs still breathe,
Our pasts are gone
Filled with lies and Deceit
Let me show you how,
Let me show you now,
All the happiness,
All the things you can be
I stand with you,
And stand beside you,
Through the darkness,
I will guide you
Fly into my arms,
Fly tword my cries
Your an angel,
In both of our eyes
Copyright ©
Froggy
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2006-10-28 00:17:24]
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Re: An Angel
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by Froggy on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 12:33:15 AM AEST
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Since i can't go back and Edit it....that top line should read
"To my amazing friend Jessica, who i would love to be able to call "MY" girl... |
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Re: An Angel
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by sally-heart-jack on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 12:43:18 AM AEST
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I just want to tell you, you CAN change the line, so just go to the site help forum thingy of the site. Oh and I like this poem lol!
It's romantic but still sad.
Unfortunate, i hope it works out for you!
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Re: An Angel
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by Kevin on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 02:00:14 AM AEST
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great poem. very heartfelt and sincere, good luck w/this relationship, i truly hope it all works out for you.
-Kevin |
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Re: An Angel
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by Skillz on
Saturday, 28th October 2006 @ 05:06:53 AM AEST
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| The typo didnt matter...you did such an awesome write here..I wish i was her..so sadly beautiful.. |
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