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Hope
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Hope
I patrol a common border
Where disappointment and dreams collide
You may never know I'm here
Though never do I hide
I am in dreams to be fulfilled
The glow of warm memories
A vision of the future
The place where sadness flees
I inspire wounded hearts
Uplift tired and weary souls
Free those bound by despair
My touch everyone knows
The promise of better tomorrows
The cessation of heartache and pain
If you know me friends
Life is never in vain
Russ
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 09:11:09 AM AEST (User
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Russ, I hope this is not the last, words are everywhere, you write wonderfully, I hope we see more of your talent, )))))Val |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 09:56:40 AM AEST (User
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Russ you are such a great poet,you cant be leaving too! This is crazy! Your words are so touching Please keep writing! Christina |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lone_er on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 11:09:27 AM AEST (User
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I would like to thank you maam
Your words touch my heart
And I am grateful indeed
Offered in kindness they impart
A certain comfort in knowing
The dream is not visible only to me
But kind and gentle hearts like yours
The dream also can see
Your kindnesses will be remembered
In both memory and written word
And your warmth will pave the way
For other hearts to be heard
Thank you Valerie--
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jessica_Saini on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 11:24:08 AM AEST (User
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I think both of the poems are beautiful:-) They made me smile:-)
~Jessica Saini |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lone_er on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 11:33:30 AM AEST (User
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If only words could describe
What your thoughts have meant to me
How a gracious, giving heart
Has allowed others to
Remember the words you write
The wisdoms you impart
Are not only written on paper
But upon anothers heart
And upon my own
In a special place indeed
These words are etched
These words decreed
When I look for a friend
I look for you
When you need a friend
Look for me too
Russ-ty |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by olhip on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 02:13:00 PM AEST (User
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i hope that you do not stop poetry because of what others say to you about your poems. honestly i really like this and would like to read more. poetry is not about acceptance but a way to say the things you can't. dont stop your talent because others dont comprehend or connect with it as long as you connect you will be fine
(exiled) olhip's son |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 03:22:51 PM AEST (User
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Russ, I was surprised to read this.. We DO appreciate your poetry and even tho we my not always have time to read all that you write, please know that I always loved your work...and would be very disappointed if you left.. Please re-consider...
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 04:34:59 PM AEST (User
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i would be sad if you left now because i have just found you and have read about 6 of your poems and come back to this one, i think your writings and poetry lovely, plz dont go or at least message me why, i think your talent is outstanding and im sorry i was unaware of you... huggs nessa |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lone_er on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 04:58:07 PM AEST (User
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Your note is so very kind maam, I thank you and I did not mean to make it sound as if I was hurt or miffed because no one reads my work--tho I see it seems that way--Maybe just in a slump-Anyway- I thank you for caring
Russ |
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Re: Hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 05:10:15 AM AEST (User
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Oh! nooo ..you should continue to write.. you have such beautiful spirit.. dear friend, I promise that I would like to read your poems without missing any one.. but you must understand the nature of many of our poets..you must write not only for others but for your self..to give an expression to the cries of your heart..I wish to read your next poem..venkat |
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