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wild settled words
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 05:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As age sits in from countless ventures and sights
looking at a history with many of endless hights
longing for the rush of many adventures anew
but no stability in this history ive never been true
Respite settles in like a coma long avoided
but is my battle scars finely been anointed
does this mean that placid i must become
to accomplish what truely should have been done
Care for myself become like the rest
or is this still part of my test
i see the signs like cracks in the walls
watching society a blank sea of dolls
Mabey settled but wild in my words i will protray
who says death has to come my way
longing for answears we all have to hear
mabey this is the time we can cheer
Raise a glass for our comman man
mabey one day we will retake the land
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2006-10-27 17:52:51]
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Re: wild settled words
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by Writing4Him on
Friday, 5th June 2009 @ 10:27:14 AM AEST
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'Does this mean that placid I must become/ to accomplish what truly should have been done?'
Great line! Quoteable! :) |
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Re: wild settled words
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by AutumnK on
Sunday, 7th June 2009 @ 08:45:54 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem, but you misspelled maybe :) |
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