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(untitled)
Contributed by
atra_phasma
on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 01:33:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Come to me on gilded wings
With maggots writhing beneath
Whisper me the lies I need
Writhe my a love, a twisted thory wreath
Make my life a living hell
See just how much pain I take
Before I resort to deadly tactics
Of revenge, and retaliate
You lie on the floor,
In a pool of ichor
But yet you live in me forevermore
I canot rid myself of you
A haunting o a tortured soul
You only wish you had not pushed me
But now I'm over the edge
You think that you can save me still
But too late i jumped
You cant save me now,
So watch....me.....fall
Now it is I in the pool of blood
Writhing on the filthy floor
I finally rid myself of you
For now and evermore
Copyright ©
atra_phasma
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2006-10-27 13:33:03]
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Re: (untitled)
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 05:49:08 PM AEST
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| Would the fall be worth it if no one was watching?I think that might be a good question to ask yourself. |
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Re: (untitled)
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by spider on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 07:15:58 PM AEST
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| some people just dont get it. of course it would be as worth it if nobody was watching. do really like the watch me fall line though. and that last stanza finishes the whole thing perfectly. great write. |
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Re: (untitled)
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by Amicus on
Saturday, 11th November 2006 @ 09:45:21 AM AEST
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Very nice matt. Though it deserves a name. It all fits together nicely.
great write |
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