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Darkest Angel
Contributed by
angelfreak
on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 11:08:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Somewhere in the distance you’re calling my name.
I hear you.
Your heartbeats from several centuries away.
I feel you.
The blood from my neck drips down your lips.
I taste you.
You scream in the night that I will be yours for eternity.
I fear you.
Come to me my darkest angel.
Come take me away and make me whole,
make me one with you and take away my soul.
Carry me back through centuries where time stands still.
Take me my darling, even against my will.
My crimson blood runs hot for you,
My lips they await,
Take me, my dearest master,
another immortal you’ll create.
Lips to lips you call my name
I hear you.
Your heartbeats against my chest.
I feel you.
Our blood entwined runs down your lips.
I taste you.
You scream in the night that I will be yours for eternity.
I love you.
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Re: Darkest Angel
(User Rating: 1 )
by justinblue on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 11:53:28 AM AEST
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| thats crazy i like it alot |
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Re: Darkest Angel
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by doug on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 07:15:42 PM AEST
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I've always loved to read vampire
poems . I really liked this one and
hope you will write more. I've always
been fascinated with the idea of a
telepathic like power that vampires
share with their lovers. Your heartbeats
from several centuries away. I feel you
That line seems to touch on the telepathic
subject. great work
Take care ,
truly , Doug |
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Re: Darkest Angel
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by secretwind on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 10:45:21 PM AEST
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| Love the pleasure and the pain of this flow |
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