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The taste of blood
Contributed by
pain
on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 08:51:16 AM in AEST
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As you lean in on me,
I begin to feel hungry for something more than just food,
I hate to be rude and whip your neck back,
I sink my teeth in and take a bite this liquid taste so right,
I must say you were a great date,
Unlike most you did not struggle,
Nor did you scream,
But to my surprise you sit up you flash your already grown fangs and give me a smile,
You say I haven"t had this happen to me in a while
I love vampires
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pain
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2006-10-27 08:51:16]
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Re: The taste of blood
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 08:58:53 AM AEST
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Vampires are awesome.. I liked this poem.. It was really good.. Welcome to YPDC... Great job
Take care
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Re: The taste of blood
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 04:59:58 PM AEST
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That is so sweet of you to dedicate this to me.
I feel so loved. This is very good and descriptive.
All in all, good write.
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