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You
Contributed by
annoiosa
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Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 01:22:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Although I've never met you,
You cause a flutter in my heart.
You're writing paints a picture,
Your form in my mind now starts.
I wonder what you look like,
And how your voice could sound.
And I wonder what you'd think,
If you knew I was writing about you now.
I wonder what kind of clothes you wear,
And about the shoes on your feet.
I wonder what you like to do,
(Besides writing poetry).
But your an entire ocean away
And will probably never meet me
So I will just keep you in my head,
And maybe see you in my dreams this evening....
Copyright ©
annoiosa
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2006-10-26 13:22:09]
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Re: You
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 03:58:52 PM AEST
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| SWEET! |
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Re: You
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 08:59:49 AM AEST
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Amazing poem..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: You
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by one-curly-fry on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 06:16:21 PM AEST
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This is a very nice write. There is a sweet feeling to it - I like the 'wonder' aspect. Still, at there's the side of the last stanza - sort of coming back down to Earth, but still holding onto the feeling.
Very nice write!
- Tim |
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Re: You
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 02:55:00 PM AEST
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| Aw, sweet =) Nice tone to it, good rhyming, nice job! |
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