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The Silent Man
Contributed by
justintears
on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 08:05:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here the sky is timeless
The tears have time to smile
She was the lie which graced my lips
My heart has ceased awhile
Brushed, her warmth against my skin
Broke, the hopes at hand
Sorrow fills an empty heart
Inside the silent man
Believe in her, I never will
Her love, a tragic sin
To grieve my passion's dire fall
I hope to breathe again
Always is the moment
To never understand
How love can be so incomplete
To me... the silent man
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justintears
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2006-10-25 20:05:27]
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Re: The Silent Man
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by Chamaron on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 10:43:08 PM AEST
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| Perfect flow, absolutely captivating in that sense. It also portrays deep emotion, but I hope, if this is true to yourself, that you don't trap that emotion inside, in silence. Excellent job and keep at it! |
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Re: The Silent Man
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 02:25:34 AM AEST
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Even your words protray the strong silent type. Your poem is heartfelt and painful. Good luck.
J~ |
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Re: The Silent Man
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by annoiosa on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 01:57:30 PM AEST
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| Wow, I really like it. I'm sorry that it's on a sad subject, but it's a beautiful poem. Hope things turn out for you... |
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Re: The Silent Man
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 05:06:19 AM AEST
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This is quite lovely a murel of turmoil fused with undeniable thruths . . . Nicely done.
thank you also for your comment . . .
Ben |
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