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DAUGHTER
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 06:39:44 PM in AEST
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So far beyond describable beauty~
as to seldom be seen outside of dreams
And, because words of her must fail in their duty~
w/o knowledge of her...a fantasy seem...
More than to the senses a rhapsody~
she is to life as are air & water
Heavens own truth w/o her a travesty~
for she is transcendence...she is daughter...
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Re: DAUGHTER
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 07:55:30 PM AEST
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You yanked the heart strings right out of me in the first line, as I am a daughter(pretty young too I admit), but I imagine my mother feeling this way about me and my sister. This was a very beautiful poem.
~Karis~ |
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Re: DAUGHTER
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 06:57:09 PM AEST
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| Yes indeed she is daughter. |
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Re: DAUGHTER
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 10:24:20 PM AEST
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Ah the pen is mighty...
Blessings
AJ |
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Re: DAUGHTER
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 11:34:20 PM AEST
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I wonder if all moms feel this way.do they?
I mean, despite some mothers being non-biological ones.
anyws,thanks for dedicating the poem to me(I'm a daughter too!), for its a beautiful poem.
cheers,
-glass |
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