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Dont Tell Me
Contributed by
pretty_ladday303
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Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 04:18:07 PM in AEST
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Dont tell me what to wear
Dont tell me how to do my hair
Dont tell me i need to care
Dont tell me i have to share
Dont tell me how to talk
Dont tell me how to walk
Dont tell me not to cry
Dont tell me i have to know why
Dont tell how to tie my shoes
Dont tell me i need clues
Dont tell me how to run my life
Dont tell me not to fuss and fight
Dont tell me to forget him
Dont tell me how to ride the rims
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Re: Dont Tell Me
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by sally-heart-jack on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 04:59:43 PM AEST
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A little juvenile....
it just seems like the rhymes were too easy. |
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Re: Dont Tell Me
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by sally-heart-jack on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 05:03:30 PM AEST
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Sorry, I forgot to add what I LIKED about the poem....
it's a nice one, short and sweet. This is what attitude you should have everyday, I know I try to.
Independance is very important!
^^ Good job! ^_^ |
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