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A Waste of Loving You
Contributed by
mangos
on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 07:22:15 AM in AEST
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The way I feel about you can only be explained with my eyes
I think about you day and night
As the stars settle and the sunrise tries-
to break through the gloom which has become my ever so cold life
In keeping with traditions I will stay back and let this play itself out
In respecting your decisions
I choose to wait for the moment never to come
So, I am left breathing in stale air and windy gushes of everyone else’s love
The dreams that force themselves into my mind when control has dwindled
Entitled I am to nothing more prolific then multiples of singles
As the wrinkles encircle an old face
I become too shy and bashful to mingle
I am left wondering why
The pouring has been stifled and rendered a mere trickle
A memory of you and another has become vastly instrumental
Crucial in my adaptation of events meant never to strangle
Tangled and stretched, the beads of sweat fall off my forehead
As I am left panting and pounding on the door for your entrance
In its entirety, I am left defenseless
Against the opposing forces
Occupying demented
Out of resentment
In and around all that was mentioned
A pretentious fantasy
Of you and me
Has ended
It has been proven
A fallacy
Of immobility
As tranquility is suspended
Upended and commended
With speeds beyond the sight of sound
Cemented into the ground
Fingers twirl around and around
Until legs get tired of sitting
And fall effortlessly
Stuck to the roots
A glue and wood-floor compound
Meant to confound
And confuse
Even the most of intelligent minds
Ingenious crimes
Perpetrated
Then reverberated
Into my kind of miserable times
You were my once in a lifetime find
In a haystack of pins and needled pines
Extremely sensitive to the harsh climate of the tumultuous climb
Sharply extended was this love of mine
___________
_______________
Copyright ©
mangos
... [
2006-10-25 07:22:15]
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Re: A Waste of Loving You
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by Kellros on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 10:11:16 AM AEST
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I know this feeling, waiting on "love" to return. Soon yet to realise you have to move on...
I liked this write, it expressed the message well |
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Re: A Waste of Loving You
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by Packatack on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 03:51:40 PM AEST
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| Sometimes I wonder if I'm wasting my time by loving this gurl I'm with...Maybe it is but we will find out soon enough....thanks for sharing ur thoughts and putting it out in words....thanks |
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Re: A Waste of Loving You
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by starry_night on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 04:41:46 PM AEST
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| I actually cried when I read this - the words so perfectly reflect my own situation, I was taken aback. This is an excellent write, I'm so glad you shared it. Jan |
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Re: A Waste of Loving You
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 05:35:28 PM AEST
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Not nice of you to make girls cry... ; )
Seems like you poured a lot of yourself into this one...some pent up emotions released here, or so it seems. Well done.
Scorp.
(Who, for the record, didn't cry, but enjoyed it nonetheless :) ) |
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