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No, Elements Transform

Contributed by yangdantien on Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 11:41:45 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Good walls buckle into jade
broken bulkheads filling
sinking feelings,
fingers count 1, 2, 3 then jump.

Once under, bubble memories rise
passing by,
one and each above.
As True Sorrow is acid touched,
sad skinned, salt tanned,
and then hung about the shoulders,
as the mariners crime:
love, love everywhere
but not a drop to drink, for the
throat is holding back pressure
reason: the world seems bleak.

This tacit Earth just spins on its axis;
a grey spine asking stem and thorn
are we simply animated? A distinct gradient
of foam: dry, hard, mostly sharp,
stretched to wax and wane
on the way to seamless stillness?






AJPIII




Copyright © yangdantien ... [ 2006-10-24 23:41:45]
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Re: No, Elements Transform (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 05:39:56 PM AEST
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Good stuff, man. Extremely intense. Thanks for sharing...... and welcome, welcome to the site. Great to have you aboard.
Peace, Laura


Re: No, Elements Transform (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 03:08:11 PM AEST
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"And we all shine on...like the moon & the stars & the sun...Yes, we all shine on...on & on & on..."-J.Lennon

I agree, we're all cool pieces of star stuff!!!

BigLoveMuchPeace,
MisfitMe


Re: No, Elements Transform (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 12:50:29 PM AEST
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Wow, AJ, there is much to ponder here. Your final
inquisitive stanza is very thought provoking and
curious. ( A question that has been mulled, perhaps
at length, for centuries, methinks)

dark, yes .. glad it's not a chronic disposition, my friend.

This is one of most exquisitely expressed dark writes
I've read in a long while. You continue to perpetuate
wonder ..

~Breezy




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