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Just Stop
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
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Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 06:35:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Stop being perfect
And stop being great
Stop being awesome
And stop breaking me
Stop letting me love you
Stop making me cry
Stop huting my feelings
And stop being unknowing
Just go away and leave me alone
Leave my mind
And leave my heart
Please...just stop...
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desolantdreamer
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2006-10-24 18:35:19]
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Re: Just Stop
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 07:16:17 PM AEST
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Occasionally I find myself listening to opera and if doesn't strike some inner cord I might as well be at the dentists office. If i try to ignore it I end up feeling like i am now getting the 'drill.' Sometimes even this dentist office trippin happens when I am reading someones half considered verse. However your piece is well crafted and reveals as well as hits and stands on that raw nerve of "...Please...just stop..."
Good job, good enough to evoke and here I must advise you that my inner "Tony Soprano" wants to come over and "take care of your little problem" if you know what I mean.
Peace
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Re: Just Stop
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:56:55 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem! Most of my grief is self inflicted because I cannot love myself or forgive myself. But still, this is a great poem!! |
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