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Who Was Told What To Do By The Man
Contributed by
yangdantien
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Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 12:50:14 PM in AEST
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The good book hid the hammer
that breaks the rock
to rubble the tunnel route.
Wave the tome when quoting,
demonstrate complete mastery,
maybe only once or twice.
Facade intact, continue to chip
and haul away debris in secret.
Innocence redeemed
in a dream upon
awakening remembered
the way is cleared
to stand on bended knees
clasp hands and beg
the sky to yield.
We are just cold, pushy,
sentient, star-foam;
searching for a wormhole
and otherside,
with a brash aplomb?
Copyright ©
yangdantien
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2006-10-24 12:50:14]
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Re: Who Was Told What To Do By The Man
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 05:41:15 PM AEST
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As I said u r a very good writer.
I luv your style. It just rolls out of the pen.
Keep up the good work.
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Re: Who Was Told What To Do By The Man
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 11:03:26 PM AEST
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You are a master at word play. I liked this piece, it felt a little spicy in it's ponderings. I am really digging your stuff.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Who Was Told What To Do By The Man
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 04:30:36 PM AEST
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There's a certain spunk to this piece that almost challenges a response out of the reader... I like the sass! Even in shorter writes you drive the point home. Nicely done!
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