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Forever Black
Contributed by
jonted
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Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 12:19:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In front of an open fire,
Within sound of angelic choir,
Surf lapping cold over feet,
All these things feel so sweet.
But if you are not there,
Perhaps if you don’t care,
What point to my mind it seems,
Of being smitten with gold dreams.
The tingle of snow on nose,
The gorgeous odour of fresh rose,
A clear blue sky to welcome the day,
All these things wonderful in all ways.
But if you are not by my side,
And if the falling tears I cannot hide,
What point of life to lead,
No lover present to see my need.
A smile that whispers all the words,
The majesty of graceful birds,
Musical sounds that take your mind,
All these things of feelings kind.
But if you never again to be with me,
If you desert my heart and flee,
Should I carry on and not look back,
Or mourn for you, forever black.
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jonted
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2006-10-24 12:19:38]
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Re: Forever Black
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 12:41:18 PM AEST
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| I liked this, well written and nice scenery :) |
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Re: Forever Black
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 05:44:34 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
I don't know how any one could turn their back on such luv as you seem to have for this person.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Forever Black
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by GingerB on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 08:59:26 PM AEST
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What a beautiful write, JonteD. I'm with Emy on this one. How can anyone not reciprocate that love. I'm left wondering who she is.
Missed ya.
Ginny |
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