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The Silk Road
Contributed by
yangdantien
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Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 10:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Rough chop echoed with
bile, nausea ripples and
separates sublingual
breath from heave.
He stood up irritated with the storm.
Raised arms wide spoke only one
word "shathaq." Be calm.
The seas broke and settled
crush, wove, the wind fell
as a dead weight, peppered
all aboard with rime.
He sat quietly, as all who fretted,
breathe and sighed in awe.
The rock in my gut
warmed in anguish, yelled rebukes.
Who are you?
How did you do that?
The sea answers no man!
'I am you' He said, 'I quell myself,
the rest followed.'
'Ah,' I longingly replied, 'Buddha Bless.'
AJPIII
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Re: The Silk Road
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 10:27:59 PM AEST
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ahh
Buddha Bless...
deep Innervision. |
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Re: The Silk Road
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 11:08:58 PM AEST
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Elegant write.
"Ah", I longingly replied, "Buddha Bless".
Thanks for sharing this.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: The Silk Road
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by MisfitMe on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 11:07:29 AM AEST
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Rub 'dat belly, Bro! Better late than never!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: The Silk Road
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 11:35:45 PM AEST
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| A good piece to pull out when all aboard are sea sick....Well done Thanks |
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Re: The Silk Road
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 09:28:06 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem and very deep! |
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