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Autumn
Contributed by
bethie
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Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 10:35:17 AM in AEST
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have you taken leave of your senses
I want to break down your defenses
open your eyes; autumn leaves are falling
listen closely; your children are calling
living on an inhumane earth
it has been ages since their birth
autumnal children are hiding behind the trees
with heads bowed and on their knees
open your eyes, autumn leaves are falling
listen carefully, your children are calling
walk with me down these gilded tree lined streets
autumnal children cry behind the trees
open your eyes
autumn leaves are falling
listen carefully
your children are calling
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2006-10-23 10:35:17]
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Re: Autumn
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 10:41:23 AM AEST
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I cannot every explain the emotion that swelled up in me reading this. Very lovely!
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Autumn
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 12:52:46 PM AEST
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A very artistically done wake up call.
You make me want to know more! |
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Re: Autumn
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by MisfitMe on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 05:02:12 PM AEST
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| Out from behind one of those trees, "Right On!" |
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