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Stuck Like Glue
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 09:57:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Is that you standing there
Watching over me without a care?
Is that you walking away
Bringing heartache to my day?
Love is not something I'm good at ignoring
But you just scoff at it like it's boring
Tell me, love, do you care
When I walk away full of tears?
Would you cry
If I would die?
Would you even notice
That I'm not there?
Sorrow and pain you stuff into me
Yet I can not go, I cannot leave
My heart traps me to you
I'm stuck to your side
God, If you are true
Let him like me
Or else let me come unglued
Copyright ©
desolantdreamer
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2006-10-23 09:57:52]
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Re: Stuck Like Glue
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by ever1der on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 10:25:15 AM AEST
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| I know these feelings..good write; good show of emotion. |
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Re: Stuck Like Glue
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 10:40:13 AM AEST
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Soul filled write here, I felt each emotion.
Beautiful though so darn sad.......
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Stuck Like Glue
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 07:31:03 PM AEST
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So far I tend to comment after reading a few pieces of that authors works. I must admit I have not done so with you. I have commented on your recent work "Just Stop" with rereading only and now I find another gem.
Dreaming and Desolation hmm you have my attention. I will continue to read and offer comments on your efforts if you like and certainly invite the same. I thoroughly enjoy the destination of your rythyms in fact you "pimped" my ride with your style.
Peace
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