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Emotional torture palace
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:33:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I've been walking in a daze
effected
by the way things change,
sometimes
there is no way to explain
what I feel
when i experience people
acting strange.
So wicked
is the pain
when emotions crack and I fade....
a tear slowly
falls
down my face
as I am alone once again
in this place.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2006-10-23 01:33:33]
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Re: Emotional torture palace
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:37:52 AM AEST
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How is it that u r alone as you have my heart in your hands?
Dang maybe I sholud be scared 'cause I could have sworn it was you.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Emotional torture palace
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by shelby on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 10:49:13 AM AEST
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Delicate in the way it is written, very beautiful.
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Re: Emotional torture palace
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 07:53:20 PM AEST
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I jumped in the moat of that structure. The wavering edge of the difference of being 'solo' and 'lonely'
but secrets in the wind keep rushing passed my ears.
Peace
Yangdntien |
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