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The Truth You Never Were
Contributed by
lieinruin
on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:08:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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These are your words to choke on
Take them as you wish
I'm tired of your lies and exaggerations
Grown weak, and oh so weary
Surely your life means more than nothing
To someone who is not me
I've seen you lie the last time
Deal death unto your heart
Although I'm unseen by human eyes
Walk in my shadows
You never were good with words anyway
So now try and justify what you've done
I never loved you anyway
I pour my hate down on you
My words come like bullets
You chose your point of view
And this is what you stood for?
Tragic, as if you designed it to be that way
Your life is so misleading
Because you live it in lies
You're not so perfect either
Copyright ©
lieinruin
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2006-10-23 01:08:07]
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Re: The Truth You Never Were
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:11:17 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing. It happens whether we need it or not. Not!
huggs,
emy
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Re: The Truth You Never Were
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:45:53 AM AEST
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I'm with Emy here. This is a great piece of writing. You've expressed your emotions well. Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: The Truth You Never Were
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by secretwind on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:56:19 AM AEST
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well done
excellent flow |
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Re: The Truth You Never Were
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by Hoshi on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 05:12:38 PM AEST
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Yea its really good. And becuz averyone eles is doing it *huggs*
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