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A Day In My Life
Contributed by
matt82583
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Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 03:36:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Just as every day comes to an end
The moments that mean a lot just fade
I enjoy every second cuz I know they will end
They are all just moments in time
During that time I couldn’t be any happier
But when they are all over I just want to cry
I feel like a moment of my life is over
A moment that I wish I could have done more
Every moment that passes I just sit in regret
Why did I not do the things I wanted
I really wish I could do and say what I think I need to
But I never do. I just keep everything to myself
No one will ever understand me so I don’t even try
People only see half of me. They see what I show
But there is another side that very few know
No one will never see the half which I hide from the world
The one thing I want in life is to have a dream come true
A moment where I know things are at their best
But I can’t make myself take chances for failure
I know what I should do, but its not something I can do
I just spend my life wishing and hoping for more
But more never comes. Every day is the same as the last
I live in a world where I want more and ask for more
But I just sit back and let everything pass me by
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2006-10-22 15:36:20]
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Re: A Day In My Life
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 04:34:31 PM AEST
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Re: A Day In My Life
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by sally-heart-jack on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 10:16:10 PM AEST
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Sometimes exactly how I feel.
Thank you for reading my mind! XD
The greatest parts are the last stanza [[ especially the 1st and 2nd lines of it ]] and all of the first one.
In general this poem at times can be a little repetitive, but that just shows that you really want your point across.
So good job! ^__^
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