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Fickle Fate
Contributed by
SerenePsycho
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Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 01:38:41 PM in AEST
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The time it quickly slips away
As I drift from day to day
With life's great joys and pains the same
I wish I had never entered the game
I know not what my future holds
I sit and wait to see how it unfolds
For happiness is clouded by pain
Just as sunshine is clouded by rain
In fear I tremble when good comes to me
Because soon to follow is worse misery
I do not rejoice when good news I hear
Instead I wonder who's death is near
Am I being punished for some previous life
Or does fate just enjoy being fickle and trite
I hope this curse will someday break
Before I end up at my own wake
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SerenePsycho
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2006-10-22 13:38:41]
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Re: Fickle Fate
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 02:01:01 PM AEST
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Good rhyming scheme and a very good write. I have had these feelings before. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Fickle Fate
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 03:36:25 PM AEST
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It does seem sometimes that any happiness we reach for is clutched away by pain..nice way of expressing it...good flow.
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Re: Fickle Fate
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 04:42:28 PM AEST
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| Earning fates jealous regard often feels as if a lose-lose proposition and I think that came through very clearly. |
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