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lost control of my life
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 01:30:14 AM in AEST
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Looking down the barrel of a gun,
my life was no longer my own,
shouting at me to get on the floor,
500 dollars and they wanted more,
my life flashed before my eyes
all i heard was a young mothers cries,
the voice of the lord above whispered in my ear
that if i did what they wanted i had nothing to fear...
but i was scared for my life and what i hadn't said,
one screw up and i could of been dead,
and all the fear ran through my head
so i hold these memories close to my heart,
fearing it all falling apart..
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2006-10-22 01:30:14]
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Re: lost control of my life
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 04:03:05 AM AEST
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| It's a wonder you could write anything at all after that, you certainly encapsulate the drama in those few lines, hope you have had a chance to calm down a little, and get some of your life back. Well done. |
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Re: lost control of my life
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by matt82583 on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 03:44:58 PM AEST
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| Its so prefectly worded too after such a horrible thing. Sorry to hear about it. But this really is a good poem. Good work |
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Re: lost control of my life
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 04:29:47 PM AEST
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| Good poem |
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