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Deep Within
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 11:14:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hear the music
from
far away
visions of love
swirl softly
and I drift in a daze...
the fires of heaven
are ablaze
and I see angels dancing,
it's comforting
to feel so beautifully.
Love peace and happiness
has control
and caresses my soul,
something crescendos
and it's so
outstanding
that I can not explain it
or give it a name...
I shiver and shake
as sensations
oh so sweetly overwhelm me
I am deep
within
an emotional happening.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2006-10-21 23:14:31]
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Re: Deep Within
(User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 12:48:53 AM AEST
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It is a wonderful poem, bliss could mean many things to many, but all the same the emotion is been expressed by our friend in a profound fashion, good writing my friend it was a real bliss to read.
FRANCO
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Re: Deep Within
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by emystar on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 01:30:58 AM AEST
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I can dig it!
Great write, my dear friend.
Bout time you had some good inner feelins. Send me some of that???
Big smiles, huggs, luv,
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