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weeping willow
Contributed by
spiritwind
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Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 10:09:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Weep not
Your cadence of crystalline tears
Weighing you down beneath burdens
Evaporating nectar from bound branches
Exploiting your melancholy shades of blue
Bend
Undefined through diversity
Endless through eternity
Knowing with each change
Unknown seasons adorning
Fresh blossoms once more
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spiritwind
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2006-10-21 22:09:49]
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Re: weeping willow
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 11:17:53 PM AEST
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From one wind to another wind
well done |
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Re: weeping willow
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 12:43:31 PM AEST
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| Strangely enough, I like the fact that you mention "shades" of blue...there are many..sigh, nicely worded. |
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Re: weeping willow
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 11:40:23 AM AEST
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I really like this piece the interplay of words dancing with emotions is quite refreshing and I daresay an impeccable piece, focused tight enough to peer wide lens into ones inner worlds with the open line shedding illumination:
"Weep not..."
not as a command or warning rather in realization for:
"...Fresh blossoms once more."
I look forward to reading more of your work
Peace
Yangdantien |
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