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To do the Best I Can
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 08:50:34 AM in AEST
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I will make my way in life no matter,
What obstacles stand within my way,
I will contemplate my problems and disasters,
But will not let them defeat me or even sway,
I will reach out for opportunities when they come,
And be there when someone needs a hand,
I will try so hard to be a better person,
When life is cruel and so very underhand,
I will make the best of what I am given,
No airs and graces will I ever show,
I will treat enemies with sympathy and kindness,
For we all need someone I know,
I will listen carefully when advice is given,
Even its something I may not want to hear,
I will do the same for others when they need it,
Because sometimes life is cruel and so unclear,
I will write down my feelings and emotions,
And always wear my heart upon my sleeve,
I am stronger for the freedom it has given,
What you see , is what you get I can concede,
So with courage, love and determination,
I set myself my own master plan,
To be just an average type of person,
By doing the very best that I can.
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Re: To do the Best I Can
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 12:08:20 PM AEST
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| Sue what can I say but a superb poem, the wording is so sublime and well crafted, it must be one of the best I have read of yours. It is of a standard that others could learn from. Execellent |
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Re: To do the Best I Can
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by EddieDean on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 05:26:51 PM AEST
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very deep poem, it is a mirror of my life and a mirror of many lives i have come in contact with. we all do what we can to be the best we can be. thats all, no more and no less. very nice work.
you have truly set the standards high, and i hope to meet them.
Eddie Dean |
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Re: To do the Best I Can
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by spiritwind on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 08:43:23 PM AEST
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You have the right idea.
All we can do is our best, you I know will do it!
You have great poetic talent as well.
SW |
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Re: To do the Best I Can
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 11:35:10 PM AEST
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life is what it is
a matrix of confusion
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we do what we can.
very good flow.... |
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Re: To do the Best I Can
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 09:28:31 AM AEST
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Ah what a great challenge you have set for yourself. I, too hope that I do the best that I can...I often fall short :) but I'll keep trying.
A pleasure to read this! |
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Re: To do the Best I Can
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 04:33:19 PM AEST
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Miss Sue, you my friend are one of the most courageous, good hearted and inspiring people I have ever come to know. No matter what situation arises you always do your best to tackle it head on and you never give up. I so much love that about you. You are a born fighter and you never let anything keep you down. I ,too, hope to do the best that I can my dear friend. The best of wishes to you always~ Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Beautifully written as is the rest of your wonderful work. Keep penning superstar~
warm smiles & hugs,
Sue M |
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Re: To do the Best I Can
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by AirHead on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 03:14:23 PM AEST
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Fantastic & so positive,
All we can ever do is be the best that we can for ourselves & others ..... we shouldn't go far wrong with this philosophy |
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