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Essential Connection
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 11:29:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I wish I could tell you a story,
Talk to you forever,
Stare into your eyes and
Spill into them the contents of my soul.
I wish I could tell you about
All of my wondrous world,
Ignoring all of our flaws, our pasts, our memories.
Just for a night, be two souls neither lost nor searching,
But found within each other.
Even if you wake up the next morning
And can’t recall my name or face,
But remember my story,
I will be satisfied.
I will tell the world I spent a night
With everything I never knew was missing.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2006-10-20 23:29:34]
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Re: Essential Connection
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by girish on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 11:12:18 AM AEST
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this poem is nice. read my poem "You are only for me" that gave me my love`s heart and that had helped an american pair get reunited. many of my other love poems "True Love","Wish to be your wife`s beloved","In our hearts" all convey the seence of love.
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Re: Essential Connection
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by gabby521 on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 10:11:03 PM AEST
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"be two souls neither lost nor searching,
But found within each other."
I love that line. Good write. |
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Re: Essential Connection
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 07:28:26 AM AEST
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*shakes her head*
That was amazing.
Especially,
"I will tell the world I spent a night
With everything I never knew was missing."
Gosh, that just conjures up so many different feelings they're just all so.. wow!
Such a powerful, powerful ending.
Thankies for sharing this.
*hugglies*
Kat.
(off to re-read, of course)
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Re: Essential Connection
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 06:25:31 PM AEST
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Thanks for notifying me, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. Your last 2 verses in your second stanza, in my opinion, were what made your poem shine.
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