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You Are Excused
Contributed by
suupjordan
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Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 07:41:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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One word could never fully define.
One leaf is not a tree.
One home is not a city.
One drop is not a sea.
One voice will catch no ears,
If others do not speak.
Revolution is denounced,
Reguardless what the preach.
They say ignorance is bliss,
And this just may be true.
But with a sense keen on corruption,
Speaking is all that we can do,
While our insides wait and ache,
For the day in which you choose.
Change seems like a nowhere place,
But I will wait for you.
Copyright ©
suupjordan
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2006-10-20 19:41:16]
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Re: You Are Excused
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by twick on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 09:06:02 PM AEST
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| feels like a very subtle gauntlet has been thrown. I like that, the challenge in this piece. Great job. |
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Re: You Are Excused
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by MandiLee on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 06:47:29 PM AEST
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| wow a great poem!!! its real talent! |
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Re: You Are Excused
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 07:37:18 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, a descriptive flow that comes from inside and ends with full understanding of your feeling |
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