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the broken record
Contributed by
twick
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Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 06:11:41 PM in AEST
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For me,
scratching the pen across paper
is like taking a razor blade across soft skin.
It purges all the ugliness,
but it's not entirely healthy.
Control a vice with a vice,
would you, really?
For me,
to scratch the pen across paper,
cuts inbetween lines to reveal
liquid, inky truths.
It's where my heart beats
but I fear it is destroying me.
How many hearts break
when it's all layed out.
For me,
these scratches are necessary,
because they keep me going
and I am (in)sane enough
to keep the pen flowing.
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-10-20 18:11:41]
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Re: the broken record
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by suupjordan on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 07:48:44 PM AEST
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| the last four line are my favorite, great poem =) |
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Re: the broken record
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by Winterland on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 08:17:02 PM AEST
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I agree. It is a good poem over all, but the last four lines give are very powerful. I do think you need to make a decision on the sane/insane though. :-)
Good job
Jennifer |
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Re: the broken record
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 08:43:34 PM AEST
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liquid, inky truths.
It's where my heart beats
love those lines..great job. |
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