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Only One Pearl
Contributed by
mrmann4sho
on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 09:12:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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“ONLY ONE PEARL”
Some say it’s better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all. I dare not differ, and the very thought makes me quiver. Cause when you’re in love, your everyday is prioritized by various tactics to be utilized in expressing your love. Then thanking the Lord above, for the days that evolve into tests, requiring answers that at best can only be possessed by the most sensitive and compassionate mind, constantly displaying gratitude for the quest. And your heart becomes addicted to the challenges being inflicted by a world where failure is restricted. Challenges to keep the love strong, to have her smiling all day long, and humming her favorite love songs. Causing you to tear when the butterflies appear, because reimbursement for your dependability is near. Now I’m longing for the pleasure, when she unleashes her treasure to me. Being most deserving and for selflessly earning this dream that has now come to be. So to wish you had never loved, you must have once been a part of, a world without peace; where love showed no increase. Relying on luck, you were bound to give up. Ignorant to the fact, that it’s faith in God you lack. See, when you’ve known this kind of love and the rewards thereof, why deny to inquire, or neglect your desire, for a gift that will forever lift the yearning, that’s constantly burning, by the fumes of loneliness in your heart. Experience the love in your heart, from the inside out; knowing without a doubt that in your heart lies a world, filled with many jewels, but “ONLY ONE PEARL”. WRITTEN BY: cljsr0028 / 2001
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Re: Only One Pearl
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
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Try as I might, I have tried to make sense of your work, but the formatting makes it difficult for the meaning to come accross. It is not written in a poetic format, that's not to say it is not good, but to write it like a newspaper article or novel, takes away the poetic meaning. I don't mean no offence, just offering an opinion. |
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