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Angel Blood
Contributed by
Craze
on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 09:07:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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As i call death a crime,
I close my eyes finally to open them to see you one last time,
As you leave the room my pain begins to climb,
I am holding a heart and realize it is mine,
It was torn out by you,
But how i thought our love was true,
I guess i drew my final straw so now i lay here dieing,
Trying to remember our past but all of that is over as an angel taps my shoulder and takes my hand,
He promises me a peaceful land, I look down at the floor,
As I let sadness sweeps over me as i see a boy lieng in the mud,
He is bleeding... he is bleeding angel blood
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Craze
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2006-10-20 09:07:28]
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Re: Angel Blood
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by shaba_11 on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 09:52:24 AM AEST
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| A good piece of writing outlining the consequences of emotion. Well done and keep writing. |
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Re: Angel Blood
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 11:21:17 AM AEST
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This is really good Craze, I really liked it a lot. I'm glad I was able to help inspire you, but this is all your masterpiece sweets...all yours.
Excellent write.
*hugs*
Rhiannon |
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Re: Angel Blood
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by crazy on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 04:34:49 PM AEST
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| i like the lines 3-6.this puts so much that i feel into word...wow..great poem |
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Re: Angel Blood
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 12:30:00 PM AEST
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Great poem.. I liked how you wrote this... I thought that it was a well written poem...
Take care
christina |
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Re: Angel Blood
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by lipsofanangel on
Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 01:55:37 PM AEST
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| That is amazingly wriiten max. Your going to make me cry. Should i beat her ass maybe??? |
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