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Heartbroken
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 04:42:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Looking deep inside myself, I'm hurt beyond belief
I wish I knew what I could do, to give myself relief
There are so many thoughts of what I should've done
To make her just love me
I cry so much it hurts inside, I just can't be happy
All my work to move ahead was crushed in just one blow
The pain is building up inside, to you I'll never show
I'm happy that you've found someone
To make your life seem great
I want to wish that you would want me back
So I could say it's too late
I'll convince myself I'm over you, and move on with my life
And desperately try to hide the wound in my heart caused by love's knife...
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darkscorpio
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2003-02-16 04:42:13]
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Re: Heartbroken
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by Jazz on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 06:10:08 PM AEST
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A heartfelt and true love poem. I am always the first to say, "I've been burned and have ths scars to prove it". Good writing!
Poetic Dreams Always,
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Re: Heartbroken
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 02:55:59 PM AEST
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This is one of my favourites of yours. I loved this beyond belief... if u only knew how much I could relate great poem!
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