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a soldiers life
Contributed by
poemprophet
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Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 07:11:43 PM in AEST
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a soldiers heart is full of passion
they see things we cant imagine
like bodies being blown to pieces
and each minute it decreases
the chance of them coming home
leaving families all alone
sons and dsughters go away
risking their lives every day
cause its their right to defend
our country till the very end
soldiers know a lot of fear
they always need to be aware
of whats going on all around
in the air and on the ground
sometimes they start to shake and shiver
dreaming there is a red river
madeof blood and they have drown
because it has sucked them down
into the hell their living in
wishing they were home again
as parents wait without fail
to get a letter in the mail
saying everythings O,K.
and they survived another day
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Re: a soldiers life
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by Oneir8dude on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 10:16:21 PM AEST
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Very Good right... I love to see people that feel
the same way I do of our beloved Protectors... I
thank you for putting this out there for us all to
read...
Bless You
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Re: a soldiers life
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 11:14:18 PM AEST
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Thank you, for expressing the feelings of most of our service members that are currently servicing in the military so far away from. I too had these same feelings when I serviced in the military during the gulf war. It is a totally different environment over there today. Your dedication is heart felt and again I thank you for it as many of service members would as well.
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Re: a soldiers life
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by crazyn on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 09:41:14 AM AEST
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| its a pity people have to go out at war like that. neither do we know the actual purpose nor incentive our leaders have to send young men who have their whole life in front of them to simply drown in the river of blood. they dont have to still be there. i say withdraw the troops and make millions of us happy and relieved. as I say no one wins the war or the battle. something is always lost. |
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Re: a soldiers life
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by vikingbrokk on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 05:19:12 PM AEST
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| as one of them, thank you. |
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