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The Dark Room
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
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Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 06:04:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Am I there yet?
In that place where darkness gives way to light
and the truth really does set you free
while time heals all pain?
No. I'm not.
Day after day I try to move one step closer to the end of this...
this pain and despair
whispers of "You're just a whore" playing through my head...
NO! No...I'm not.
Hours passing way too slowly
as I watch my life turn with the second hand
counting the seconds as my life circles this clock
one...
more...
time.
Locked away in this dark room,
I pour my heart out for help.
None comes.
"It's just poetry.
Someone telling a sad story."
The lock on the door is real
Only seven more hours to go
then the screaming starts,
the dysfunction and the abuse.
I'm tired now and I'm going to go to sleep.
~Rhiannon
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Re: The Dark Room
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by strawberryshortcake on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 06:40:36 AM AEST
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| i feel the pain in your words. this took me back in my mind clear as glass to my childhood.i can remember being locked away in the dark closet for days by my father. it really makes me love the sunshine now. |
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Re: The Dark Room
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 11:48:05 AM AEST
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Rhiannon, This was a spine-chilling write. I wish no one had do endure such pain...such memories of terror. You are a beautiful, well spoken, sister.....never let them take that away from you. *I'm hugging you tight*
Peace, Laura |
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Re: The Dark Room
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by shelby on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 02:13:44 PM AEST
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YOu gave me chills allover reading this.
Written with such talent, I'm so sorry that this haunts you.
~Michelle~ |
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