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SHUT UP!!
Contributed by
Hoshi
on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 03:08:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sweet and silently
I sit before you.
And you keep talking.
While I wait till your through.
Everyones quite,
Putting up with your voice.
What they don't know
Is that I have a choice.
I hold my hands at my sides.
keeping them in check.
Fighting the temptation
To take hold of your neck.
I curl up my fingers
In my small pockets
So not to scratch your eyes
Right out of there sockets.
I keep my legs stiff,
Tight, neat and straight.
As you ramble on
I fill up with hate.
I keep my eyes down.
So not to glare.
So not to set you aflame,
With my horrid stare.
When you mouth opens
I hear nothing but lies.
And as I wait for the moment
The life leaves your eyes.
As everyone left..
It was just me and you..
You mouth still open..
As you lips start to turn blue..
Copyright ©
Hoshi
... [
2006-10-19 15:08:03]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: SHUT UP!!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 03:18:51 PM AEST
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I can really feel the hatred in this poem. as another poet whose friends told me that i have talent, i believe your friends are right. I hope you continue writing
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Re: SHUT UP!!
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by requiemfradream on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 03:41:26 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem because i read it and it makes me think of situatins i've been in and it's like i'm right there with you |
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Re: SHUT UP!!
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 03:51:58 PM AEST
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| yep, yep, yep..rotflmao..loved this because I relate..wonderful. |
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Re: SHUT UP!!
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by Hoshi on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 08:20:15 PM AEST
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| I'd like to thank you all for your support. hopfully I'l hit inspiration soon. |
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Re: SHUT UP!!
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by angelfreak on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 11:41:11 AM AEST
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| Great Write! Man oh man, how many times I have been in those shoes, even just the sound of their voice making me want to choke them. Great job expressing that. |
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